Lately in literacy we have been doing these pomes called start and stop poems. Start and stop poems are where you do a poem but what you start with you finish with. Example – I stare then you have your poem as I stare. It is really hard to explain but you get the idea. Here are some of mine….

As I lay down….

As I lay down all snug as a bug, I shut my heavy eyelids tight. Thoughts start to wonder around my head some about friends, others about school but mostly on food. I imagine my mind as a clear flowing river and the silver salmon fish are my thoughts. Soon a dream comes alone dancing and prancing with a horse and a hen. Dreams are so weird but so beautiful, all as I lay down.

Whatever you do……

Whatever you do don’t touch the super tasty die for cupcakes I say nearly flooding the house with dribble. I   stare at the luscious topping with chocolate chips in plated on it as the topping melts down the spongy side. My lips get dry my mouth drops as i am hypnotised. I start to walk over. No I say whatever you do.

I did some more but they are my favourite. Ope you liked them.      Ally.vb

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